The chart below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six science related subjects at a UK university in 2009

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The chart below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six science-related subjects at a UK university in 2009.

The bar chart illustrates the number of male and female students doing scientific research on six different subjects at a university in the UK in the year 2009.

Overall, male students surpassed female students in five out of six categories. Biology was the most famous field of research among both sexes in 2009, while the opposite was true for Veterinary medicine. A further point of interest is that the most striking disparity in both two genders was recorded in Physics.

Looking at the chart in more detail, Biology came top of the chosen subject list of both men and women with 240 and 200 students respectively. Similarly, the number of males who studied Medicine as their major (about 200 students) was also slightly higher than that of female ones (about 175 students). In addition, the figure for male physics students was about 220, almost five times as much as female physics students.

In terms of Astronomy and Geology, an equal number of men (about 150 students) got involved in research, whereas the number of women in these fields ranged from 60 to 80. On the other hand, Only approximately 90 male students chose Veterinary medicine, which was three-fourths as much as female ones.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, similarly, so, whereas, while, in addition, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95073891626 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57944694758 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.583667129 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.666666667 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.55555555556 5.23603664747 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359902970813 0.215688989381 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154033214091 0.103423049105 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143192614254 0.0843802449381 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254464790466 0.15604864568 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158176746305 0.0819641961636 193% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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