the chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used internet everyday from 2003 2006

The columnar graph illustrates the internet usage of a cohort of the UK from 2003 to 2006.

There are two age groups above the age 54 (55-64 and 65+) which had the least usage of the Internet. In 2003 there are no adults at the age of 65+ using the internet as per the record.

In the total population of Great Britain in 4 years, the internet surfer shows dominance among the youth generation aged between 16 and 24, which was above 80%. 2005 was the year where the figure skyrocketed and achieved a peak at 100%, which was the maximum achieved during this graph evaluation. The statistics were good but it was not maintained for too long there is a slight drop in the consecutive year to 90%.

A common upward trend of increased users every year is observed in netizens. In the 25-44 group, there was a gradual increase in the percentage from half the group to four-fifths of the group. The next group has the same pattern but with different figures starting from 60% to 80%. A similar increase in trend was observed for the 55 to 64-year-olds, but the statistics of 2003 is 30% and reaching only 50% in 2006.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (2 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ge groups above the age 54 55-64 and 65+ which had the least usage of the Interne...
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...between 16 and 24, which was above 80%. In 2005, the figure increased and achieved...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41477272727 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36914104417 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585227272727 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1660919472 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.3333333333 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.777777777778 5.23603664747 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330247045089 0.215688989381 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124514469528 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885295692534 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189029295068 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726918838059 0.0819641961636 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.03 61.2550243902 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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