The chart below shows the percentage of boys and girls in one country who played various sports in 2010

The difference in sports participation rate between two genders in a particular country in the year 2010 is demonstrated in the bar graph. Overall, boys took up a more variety of sports than girls with an obviously higher proportion at each. Besides, while girls were more interested in netball, football was the most chosen sports by boys.

As is illustrated by the graph, 20% of boys were keen on football, which was excessively fourfold that of girls. Swimming and cricket shared the same proportion, at around 12.5% for each. However, while the former was surpassed by girls at around 3.5%, the latter experienced a vast dominance by more than 12% trespassing the girls.

Netball, on the contrary, was girls' favorite with around 17.5% of girls taking part in, whereas the proportion of boys was the same as that of girls in cricket. Tennis and basketball were preferred by both genders, with approximately 8% and 7.5% in boys and 7.5% and 6% in girls.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, whereas, while, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9018404908 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7340909119 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570552147239 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.1426375869 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.875 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164683752373 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720565408129 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447282625526 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11739483246 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588509965156 0.0819641961636 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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