the chart below shows the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world
The chart gives information about water consumption in six different regions for which is used for agriculture, domestic and industrial purpose.
Overall, we can see that the use of water for agriculture has been used mostly in these three areas of the world which are africa, central asia and south east asia.
On the other hand, in north America, industry consumed half of the total water. similarly, the 53% of water used for same purpose in europe.
While, the percentage of water used in domestic uses is less than the other two sectors such as agriculture and industrial. approximatly between 7% to 9%.
To sum up, it can be seen that the pattern of water use was different in all six areas of the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Similarly
...ustry consumed half of the total water. similarly, the 53% of water used for same purpose...
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Suggestion: Approximatly
...ors such as agriculture and industrial. approximatly between 7% to 9%. To sum up, it can ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, similarly, so, while, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 598.0 965.302439024 62% => OK
No of words: 125.0 196.424390244 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.784 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.34370152488 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56781307731 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 189.0 283.868780488 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9187561625 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4285714286 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.462939711863 0.215688989381 215% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186751519575 0.103423049105 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112204059787 0.0843802449381 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237279599601 0.15604864568 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589670805428 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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