The graphs illustrate proportion of water consumption in 3 fields, which are industrial, agricultural and domestic use of six areas in the world.
We can see clearly that there are only North America and Europe having the rate of agricultural water use below 50 percent, with respectively 39 and 32 percent. Besides, they seem to focus more on the development of industry by significant ratios of 48 percent for North America and 53 percent for Europe. In contrast, the other areas present their reliance on agriculture due to their enormous percentage in this niche. Among these, Central Asia tend to show the most obvious sign with nearly 90 percent amount of water earned for planting crops. In addition, unlike North America, the area of South America does not have the strength in industry by just a small figure of 10 percent. In terms of domestic use, it occupies a moderate number in almost pie charts indicated yet not a drastical rate of under 20 percent in all cases.
In general, it can be assumed that most parts of the world could still not be able to have industrialization in their scale.
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- In modern society some people argue that schools become unnecessary as children can study at home via the Internet Do you agree or disagree 89
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 447, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Asia) must be used with a third-person verb: 'tends'.
Suggestion: tends
...n this niche. Among these, Central Asia tend to show the most obvious sign with near...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rate of under 20 percent in all cases. In general, it can be assumed that most pa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, still, in addition, in contrast, in general, in all cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79581151832 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72406319142 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643979057592 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 13.8061354115 43.030603864 32% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.5 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 5.23603664747 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152295935623 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669189655185 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424205025094 0.0843802449381 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104027354899 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585613301962 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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