The chart below shows the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features ,and make comaparisons where relevant.
The given Pie charts illustrates the percentage of water consumed in three different fields(industrial, agriculture and domestic use)in six regions of the world.
Overall, highest percentage of water is used on agricultural activities worldwide, the least amount of it is consumed in homes. In North America and Europe, as opposed to other four regions, most of the water is used in industries.
In Africa, two Asian regions of central Asia and South East Asia and South America more than 2/3rd of water is taken by agricultural sector ( 84%, 88%, 81% and 71%respectively). As opposed to 2 other regions where its use is even less than half of the total (39% in South America and 32% in Europe).
In the regions of North America and Europe the dominant use of water is in industry where around about half of the total water is consumed in each region(48% and 53% respectively). On the other hand, other regions consume significantly lower amount of water on this area.
The domestic use is the least of all areas. The highest use in this sector is by South America (19%) and the least by two asian regions (7% each).
- Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 78
- Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 53
- The chart below shows yhe percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comaparisons where relevant 74
- The chart below shows the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comaparisons where relevant 79
- The chart below shows yhe percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features ,and make comaparisons where relevant. 64
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78238341969 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76597568558 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471502590674 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5611998544 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.555555556 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153795221658 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755860441982 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474096106633 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101530968347 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521794455147 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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