The chart below shows the percentages of industry sector’s contribution to the economy of India and Turkey in 2000.
The two pie charts depict how to industry sector’s contributed to economy of India and Turkey in 2000 in eight different sectors.
Overall, it can be manifested that in India agriculture was highest and construction was the lowest contribution to the economy in the year 2000 and the same year in the Turkeys economy was the lowest is finance business and other and the highest economy was healthcare and education.
First of all, in India agriculture was the highest contribution to the economy around 24% and government was the exact half then agriculture (12%) in the year 2000. Leisure and hospitality and healthcare and education in India both were same contributed to the economy 17% in 2000. In India trade utilities and transportation was 14% contribution to the economy in 2000 and manufacturing was almost half contributed to the economy around 8%. In the year 2000 finance Business and other and construction was contribution to the economy 5-3 percentage respectively in India.
Secondly, in the Turkey healthcare and education was 17% and trade utilities and transportation was approximately 1% less around 16% contribution to the economy in 2000. In Turkey agriculture and leisure and hospitality both were same (14%) construction to the economy in 2000. Government and finance business and other we’re almost same contribution to the economy around 9-8 percentages in 2000. Manufacturing was the 12% contribution to the economy in Turkey and construction was contribution to the economy 2% less then manufacturing around 10% in year 2000.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 6.8 324% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 3.97073170732 554% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 965.302439024 136% => OK
No of words: 249.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28514056225 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21514476382 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.313253012048 0.547539520022 57% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 410.4 283.868780488 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0525753732 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.6 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393230187972 0.215688989381 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.227364973565 0.103423049105 220% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866919246441 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.310971632583 0.15604864568 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0999185018558 0.0819641961636 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 11.4329268293 188% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 11.0658536585 199% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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