The chart below shows the percentages of industry sectors contribution to the economy of India and Turkey in 2000

Essay topics:

The chart below shows the percentages of industry sectors contribution to the economy of India and Turkey in 2000.

The pie charts indicate how to eight number industrial sectors contributed to the Indian and Turkeys economy in the percentage and the year of 2000.

Overall, it can be manifested that the agriculture was highest contributed sector in the Indian economy, construction was the leasted sector other hand, healthcare and education were donated a huge percentage in the Turkeys economy.

Firstly, in India where healthcare, education, and leisure had given the same amount of percentage seventeen only but agriculture was almost a qurter percent(24%).and governments sector was donated 12% only then manufacturing construction, finance business and others services which had 8%, 3%, and 5% respectively.
Secondly, in Turkish, Healthcare services had given constant growth in both countries. And construction, manufacturing sectors were donated 1/10 and 12% in these sectors but trade, utilities and transportation services was increased two percent in compare to India which is sixteen percentage only. Agriculture and Leisure sectors contributed same percentage (14%) in the country economy. And finance, business and others and government services were given same percentage which was right and nine percent respectively.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 6.8 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 33.7804878049 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.84916201117 4.92477711251 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16448764976 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536312849162 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.4243541287 43.030603864 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.571428571 112.824112599 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 5.23603664747 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283745203069 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151149886813 0.103423049105 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139380794884 0.0843802449381 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212803338713 0.15604864568 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145669791068 0.0819641961636 178% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.2329268293 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 61.2550243902 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.95 11.4140731707 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 11.4329268293 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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