The diagram illustrates the recycling process which makes waste paper reusable.
It is clear that there are six stages in the paper recycling process. Overall, used paper being sorted and cleaned, after the process, is turned into usable paper.
The process begins with collecting the waste paper from public paper banks and from many companies. The next stage is to classify the collected paper using hand to examine whether it is good enough to recycle or not. The unsuitable paper is then removed while the suitable one is delivered to a paper mill at the third stage.
The process continues with the paper being cleaned, pulped and removed some stuck materials like staples ‘cleaning’ step,
or remained inks and glues, in ‘de-inking’ step. At the final step, the cleaned paper is finally passed to the paper making machine to produce the usable paper.
- Brick manufacturing 84
- Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them? 84
- The charts below show the levels of participation in education and science in developing and industrialised countries in 1980 and 1990. 73
- Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life Is it a positive or negative development 88
- As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 218, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...er it is good enough to recycle or not. The unsuitable paper is then removed while ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... to a paper mill at the third stage. The process continues with the paper being ...
^^^
Line 7, column 132, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... like staples 'cleaning' step, or remained inks and glues, in 'de-...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, then, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 748.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 143.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23076923077 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85234117241 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608391608392 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9926331533 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278648472241 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151401726166 0.103423049105 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646647112765 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177144504697 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061005399867 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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