the chart below shows the proportion of profits made from the seven most viewed movie genres in us cinemas in 1995, 2000 and 2005 as a percentage of the total earnings of the us film industry for each year
The chart illustrates the percentage of revenues made from seven movie genres which were most watched in US cinemas between 1995 and 2000 as the proportion of the total profits made by the US film industry for each day.
Looking at the graph, it is immediately obvious that all of the percentage of profits made by viewers who watched seven movie genres varied continuously from 1995 to 2005, with both Drama and Adventure had most significant changes. These also earned more money than the others.
To begin with, the proportion of revenues made from Drama movies stood at nearly 30 percent in 1997. This figure went down sharply to just 15 percent in 2005. Drama movies opposite trend in Adventure films, which experienced the fastest growth in profits, with peak at nearly 25 percent.
By contrast, the percentage of profits made from three movie genres, namely Thriller, Musicals and Animation remained relatively stable. They also had less money than the others, without up to 25 percent
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my essay can score at 6.0 ?
my essay can score at 6.0 ?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01204819277 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44183312107 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614457831325 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.4186532534 43.030603864 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401589989385 0.215688989381 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150574204551 0.103423049105 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.195414659149 0.0843802449381 232% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259141408457 0.15604864568 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.222446635077 0.0819641961636 271% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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