The chart below shows the proportion of single child families in cities outskirts and rural areas of China from 1980 to 2000

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The chart below shows the proportion of single-child families in cities, outskirts and rural areas of China from 1980 to 2000.

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of families having only-child in cities, outskirts and rural areas of China between 1980 and 2000. Units are measured in percent.
Overall, it is clear that the number of only-born families increased over 20 years. In cities, there was a higher proportion of parents not having a second child, being higher than that in two other areas.
Cities' single-child family rate was exactly 50% in 1980, being higher than rates of outskirts and rural areas (about 41% and 10% respectively). After ten years, it rose to around 95%, while the figure reached approximately 70% in outskirts and increased nearly twice as high as its rate in 1980 in rural areas. Over the first period of ten years, the proportion of parents whose child was not having siblings went up roughly double.
In the last ten-year period, those areas continued to experience an increase. There was a slight rise in the figure of cities, by approximately 4%, but it almost hit the maximum point (just below 100% by about 1%). In the same way as in cities, in outskirts, the proportion rocketed quickly from 70% to 98%, having greatly narrowed the gaps between cities and the outskirts. However, the area experiencing the highest dramatic climb was rural areas, by around a half. Therefore, the rate of families with a child has been predicted to continue to increase after 2000, possibly reaching 100%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... than rates of outskirts and rural areas about 41% and 10% respectively. After te...
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... 4%, but it almost hit the maximum point just below 100% by about 1%. In the same...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, second, therefore, while, in the same way

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 237.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92827004219 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5842495442 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573839662447 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2046704057 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3333333333 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353737213096 0.215688989381 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115103301214 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128990840882 0.0843802449381 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229510129806 0.15604864568 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127318434403 0.0819641961636 155% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... than rates of outskirts and rural areas about 41% and 10% respectively. After te...
^^
Line 4, column 183, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... 4%, but it almost hit the maximum point just below 100% by about 1%. In the same...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, second, therefore, while, in the same way

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 237.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92827004219 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5842495442 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573839662447 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2046704057 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3333333333 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353737213096 0.215688989381 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115103301214 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128990840882 0.0843802449381 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229510129806 0.15604864568 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127318434403 0.0819641961636 155% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.