The bar chat illustrates the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in Sydney , Melbourne , Brisbone ,debaide ,Hobart.
The higgest persentage is went to cafe for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks in Hobart and the lowest is bought fresh coffee in last 4 weeks.
Brought fresh coffee in last 4 weeks in Sydney was much more than in Melbaurne with 44% and 43%.In Brisbane and Adelaide the percentage of bought fresh coffee in last 4 weeks was the same at around 34%.Then in Hobart the percentage of this section slightly rose.The second bar is bought instant coffee in last 4 weeks in Hobart the percentage of this indicator was higgest than in Brisbane aproximately 54.5% and 54% .In Sydney boght instant coffe in last 4 weeks declined to 45.5% then increased to 46.5% in Melbourne.In Adelide marginally rose to 50%.In third is went to a cafe for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks.In Hobart with 63% then in Melbaurne at around 62.5% then in Sydney and Brisbane percentage in went to cafe fall marginally to 62% and 55.1%.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: hesper105
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...tea buying and drinking habits in Sydney , Melbourne , Brisbone ,debaide ,Hobart. ...
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...nd drinking habits in Sydney , Melbourne , Brisbone ,debaide ,Hobart. The higg...
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... habits in Sydney , Melbourne , Brisbone ,debaide ,Hobart. The higgest persent...
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...n Sydney , Melbourne , Brisbone ,debaide ,Hobart. The higgest persentage is we...
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...Melbourne , Brisbone ,debaide ,Hobart. The higgest persentage is went to cafe f...
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...more than in Melbaurne with 44% and 43%.In Brisbane and Adelaide the percentage of...
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...last 4 weeks was the same at around 34%.Then in Hobart the percentage of this secti...
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...he same at around 34%.Then in Hobart the percentage of this section slightly rose...
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...n in Brisbane aproximately 54.5% and 54% .In Sydney boght instant coffe in last 4 ...
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...5% then increased to 46.5% in Melbourne.In Adelide marginally rose to 50%.In third...
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...ourne.In Adelide marginally rose to 50%.In third is went to a cafe for coffee or t...
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... cafe for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks.In Hobart with 63% then in Melbaurne at ar...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... cafe for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks.In Hobart with 63% then in Melbaurne at ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6256684492 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51415744422 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454545454545 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 62.0 22.4926829268 276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 287.650636865 43.030603864 668% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 288.333333333 112.824112599 256% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.3333333333 22.9334400587 272% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101043406397 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130471591518 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109514395826 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130471591518 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109514395826 0.0819641961636 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.5 13.2329268293 238% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 33.93 61.2550243902 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.9 10.3012195122 232% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 26.8 10.9970731707 244% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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