The bar chart compares the percentage of citizens having different habits of drinking coffee and tea in five distinct cities in Australia in last 4 weeks.
It is clear that except for people in Adelaide, most residents in the 4 others cities went to a cafe for drinks. Also, the rate of people ordering instant coffee was always higher than those consuming fresh coffee in all the 5 cities.
Regarding the drinking habits of people in Sydney and Melbourne in last 4 weeks, the percentage of peole having coffee and tea in a cafe in Melbourne was about 63%, compared with around 61% of people in Sydney. Similarly, the proportion of citizens buying instant coffee in Belbourne was roughly 48%, which was gently higher than the figure for those in Sydney (at approximately 43%). Meanwhile, the rates of residents spending on fresh coffee in the both of cities were under 45%.
In terms of the remaining cities, the proportion of people having drinks in a cafe was around 62%, in comparison with about 55% of people in Brisbane and 49% of citizens in Adelaide. Additionally, buying instant coffee accounted for roughly 53% of people in Hobart, followed by Brisbane and Adelaide (at 52% and 50% respectively). Lastly, close to 38% of people spending on fresh coffee in Hobart while those figures were nearly 34% in Brisbane and Adelaide.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, lastly, regarding, similarly, so, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1109.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86403508772 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59015273629 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491228070175 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 332.1 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6317487963 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.222222222 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207724339813 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949235669064 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513825861282 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145237800147 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405860113818 0.0819641961636 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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