The bar graph illustrates the habit of purchasing, and drinking of citizens in 5 major cities in Australia.
Overall, in all 5 of the cities, people prefer going to Café more than buying fresh coffee. With Melbourne has the highest number of people went to the shop for their drink while Adelaide has the lowest, and Sydney has the highest percentage of people buying fresh coffee while Brisbane has the lowest.
In Sydney, around 44 and 46 percent of the population, in Sydney, choose to buy their coffee fresh and instant respectively, while approximately 62 percent went to the prefer shops for their drinks drink in the last 4 weeks . Melbourne percentage of people goes to Café was around 64 percent while 47 and 43 percent of people choose to buy their drink either fresh or instant.
In Brisbane, the number of people goes to Café for their drink in the last 4 weeks was around 56 percent, fresh and instant coffee was about 53 and 38 respectively. Adelaide had approximately 49 percent of people went to Café while nearly 50 percent and 34 percent of people bought instant and fresh respectively. In Hobart, the number of people went to Café was around 63 percent, around 54 percent of people bought instant coffee, and about 37 percent of people bought instant coffee.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1065.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7972972973 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53841764048 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.405405405405 0.547539520022 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 295.2 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.4453692998 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.125 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.75 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 5.23603664747 12% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129262609855 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788221559035 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.020573445028 0.0843802449381 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991525613744 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0114104180473 0.0819641961636 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.