In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e books rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
It is true with the thrive of technology, most of our leisure activities are now available in the digital world mainly books.There is benefit towards this advancement but also drawbacks for this technology advancement.
One evident advantage is the convenient that e-book has. Digital copies can be access anywhere in the world, as long as there is internet access, not only that, but you can also store as many books as you like without having to worry about space and weight of the luggage you are carrying. For instance, you only need to bring your tablet or smartphone to read your books, and it can also help you stored books that you have and want to read without having to bring all the books you want to read in a luggage or a backpack.
But there is a drawback for this piece of technology. Mainly, digital books are required to have internet access, or you have to download them prior before you are able to read any of them. For example, tablet and smartphone can store as many books as you want them to carry but required you to have access to the internet or download them back to your device hard drive before you are able to access any books that you want.
In conclusion, there are up side for using digital copy of a book that could benefit the user mainly in convenient, however, there is a downside for e-book that user should consider when using digital books.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... luggage you are carrying. For instance, you only need to bring your tablet or s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1136.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.544 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34645605115 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.1535568938 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.0 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.25 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117678714256 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679247451398 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519037248402 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0705602955567 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444301117749 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.