The chart below shows the results of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities

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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The given bar chart compares the coffee and tea preferences of people in five different cities in Australia in the last four weeks.
Overall, it is clear that while Adelaide was the only city that saw buying instant coffee as the most common alternative, the most popular option in the other four cities was to go to a café to get a drink.
The figures for Sydney and Melbourne were almost the same, both cities experienced the lowest figures in the percentage of people buying fresh coffee in the last four weeks, at about 43%, compared to the approximate number of 45% of people purchasing instant coffee. The proportions of people going to a café for coffee or tea were highest in these two cities, both at over 60%. In Hobart, under 40% of the people asked in the survey bought fresh coffee, whereas the figures for the other two categories were considerably higher, at under 55% for instant coffee and 65% for getting to a café.
Regarding Brisban, the lowest point of 33% was seen in the percentage of people opting for fresh coffee, which was about 20% fewer than those buying instant one and going to a coffee shop. On the other hand, instant coffee was the best choice in Adelaide, at 50%, while the figures for people choosing fresh coffee and a drink in the café were only 33% and 39%, respectively.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, whereas, while, as to, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 235.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6170212766 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34759443641 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485106382979 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 322.2 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.0025509526 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.0 112.824112599 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5714285714 22.9334400587 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246304408113 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134771420034 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535297448318 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171393794549 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047446372183 0.0819641961636 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.2329268293 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.11 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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