The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The presented bar charts illustrate the information how people buy and drink coffee and tea in the cities as Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, Hobart in the last four week.
Overall, the minority of people preferred fresh coffee, but most of all people bought both drinks in cafes.
It is observed that the majority of people in Sidney, Melbourne and Hobart went to a cafe for coffee or tea. The number of these people exceeded 60 percent respectively. Moreover, in Hobart more than 50 percent of people preferred the instant coffee, this percentage was higher than in other cities. Brisbane took the next place, where people drank the instant coffee.
According to the bar charts, less than 35 percent of people in Brisbane and Adelaide bought fresh coffee, while in Sydney and Melbourne these numbers almost achieved 45 percent. General consumption of both drinks is less in Adelaide, each of three categories show less than 50 percent of people apart.
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Suggestion:
...eeded 60 percent respectively. Moreover, in Hobart more than 50 percent of people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 810.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09433962264 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48889785947 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591194968553 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6378825728 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.25 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201435736472 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953187533294 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715529846315 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139361830728 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690976945945 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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