The bar chart compares five Australia cities: Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart in terms of how often people buy and drink a different types of coffee.
The first option is bought fresh coffee in last 4 weeks. In Sydney, almost 43.7 percent of city residents and has the same amount as Melbourne which is 42 percent. The figure for Brisbane and Adelaide citizens have a nearly same, 34.5percent and 35.5 percent. In Horbart has 36 percent.
The second option is bought instant coffee in last 4 weeks. There was the highest in Hobart, which is 54 percent. The figure for people's bought instat coffee in Brisbane was slightly lower, representing nearly 53 percent. Melbourne and Adelaide cities have almost the same number at 48 percent ad 49.8 percent respectively. Next, Sydney city has 45.3 percent.
The last option is went to cafe' for coffee or tea for five Australia cities. In Melbourne, people went to a cafe' for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks 61 percent of city residents, while Hobart city has the same amout as Sydney. In Brisbane, citizens went to a cafe' for coffee or tea 56 percent. the lowest is Adelaide that shows 49.9 percent of city residents. In Sydney, people went to a cafe' for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks 61 percent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... almost the same number at 48 percent ad 49.8 percent respectively. Next, Sydney ...
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...to a cafe for coffee or tea 56 percent. the lowest is Adelaide that shows 49.9 perc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1036.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68778280543 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44907177107 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.447963800905 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4483941207 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.0666666667 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7333333333 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6 5.23603664747 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1305492572 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056251252299 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417370159958 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089722528694 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450381331471 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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