The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given chart delineates the comparative data about peoples habits of buying and drinking coffee and tea in five different Australian cities.Also habits distinguished into 3 category like bought fresh coffee , bought instant coffee and went to cafe for tea or coffee.
In general ,it can be noticed that , there were least number of people prefer to bought fresh coffee in all cities and majority of people loved to drink tea and coffee in cafe.In Adelaide , masses were not interested to drink coffee or tea compared to other cities.
As it can be seen that, the ratio of bought fresh coffee by the citizen of Australia were less than 45 . Only in Sydney and Melbourne , more than 40 percentage people interested to fresh coffee. Moreover, the ratio of bought instance coffee was more than 45 in five cities and Hobart was witness of highest selling of instance coffee.
It is apparently seen that, the proportion of drink coffee in cafe were almost similar in Melbourne and Hobart and it was highest among the all cities . In Adelaide, less than 50 percentage residents visit to cafe for drink coffee.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Also
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...cities.Also habits distinguished into 3 category like bought fresh coffee , bought insta...
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...drink tea and coffee in cafe.In Adelaide , masses were not interested to drink cof...
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...e citizen of Australia were less than 45 . Only in Sydney and Melbourne , more tha...
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... than 40 percentage people interested to fresh coffee. Moreover, the ratio of bou...
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...ught instance coffee was more than 45 in five cities and Hobart was witness of hi...
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Suggestion: of the highest
... in five cities and Hobart was witness of highest selling of instance coffee. It is...
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...een that, the proportion of drink coffee in cafe were almost similar in Melbourne...
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... and it was highest among the all cities . In Adelaide, less than 50 percentage re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, if, moreover, so, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9414893617 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48481946453 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505319148936 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.6899184532 43.030603864 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.714285714 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8571428571 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 1.69756097561 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215716251327 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988280261965 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086602450835 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148975439264 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845770651744 0.0819641961636 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.