The chart below shows three different crimes and the number of cases committed between 1970 and 2005 in England and Wales. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the variation of three kinds of crimes and the quantity of cases committed between 1970 and 2005 in England and Wales.
In generally, the most common form of crime was car theft, except in 1980. In that year, the number of house burgling cases exceeded that of car theft cases. Although the quantity of street robbery always was least, it continuously rise in last decade.
After 1970, there was a gradual increase in car theft, which had occurred 0.4 million times already. After peaking at 1.6 million in 1995, it considerably declined to 1 million cases in 2005. Rapidly growing after 1970, house burgling peaked at 0.9 million cases in 1980. For the first time, it became the major form of crime. House burgling showed a downward trend, declining to 0.5 million cases in 2005, although it rebound slightly between 1985 and 1995.
35 years witnessed climbed Street robbery at 0.1 million cases from 1970 and it reaching peak at 0.4 million cases. The number of street robbery was only less than that of house burgling by 20% in 2005. In that year, the number of car theft was largest (1 million), followed by house burgling (0.5 million) and street robbery (0.4 million).
- The chart below shows three different crimes and the number of cases committed between 1970 and 2005 in England and Wales. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.(from C8T4 TASK1) 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'was'.
Suggestion: was always
...Although the quantity of street robbery always was least, it continuously rise in last dec...
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Line 5, column 233, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'rises'?
Suggestion: rises
...bbery always was least, it continuously rise in last decade. After 1970, there...
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Line 9, column 460, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rebound slightly between 1985 and 1995. 35 years witnessed climbed Street robber...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85024154589 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26867022084 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512077294686 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8697324214 43.030603864 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6666666667 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.41666666667 5.23603664747 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157212167978 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737171979339 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789196019184 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13597105898 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107019489179 0.0819641961636 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.