The chart below shows the total number of books sold at three bookshops in Bayside City last year.
The line chart depicts the number of books sold at Bayside City’s bookshops including: barnes and noble, cozy corner and frugal muse in last year. Generally, sale of books at three stores increased slightly, but the highest sales was barnes and noble and the least was frugal muse while cozy corner fluctuated during the year.
As the graph shows, Barner and noble sold slighty less than 25,000 books in Janurary after that it increased steadily untill may by exactly 30,000 books. during period may to august, sales of this store, growth considerably and peaked at over 41,000 books in august. after that, there was a substanialy decreased until the end of the year which finished at around 35,000.
Meawhile, cozy Corned began at around 26,000 sales in first month after that there was a signigicant fluctuations in books sales during six months with peaked at roughly 33,000 in July and troughed at 15,000 books in february. From august to the end of year, cozy corner’s sales remain the same over 21,000 products.
Regarding frugal muse, it started over 5,000 books and doubled in february, unchanged in March about 9,000. after that sales index decline sharply at under 4,000 in may. there was a rapid rose from June before gradual growth from September and end at over 10,00 books sales in December.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, may, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1100.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97737556561 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22833106779 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58371040724 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2505248588 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225775433858 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106267131181 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116751172417 0.0843802449381 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155274298483 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104519237912 0.0819641961636 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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