The given bar chart illustrates that the time spent by UK residents on different types of telephone calls such as Local, National and international and Mobile calls between 1995 and 2002 and is measured in billion minutes.
Overall, the local fixed line substantially increased until around the year 1998 before it receded.The national and international hooked line grew considerably over the periods 1995 to 2002.All calls of mobiles steadily increased until 1999 and then suddenly rose from 2000 to 2002.
From 1995 to 2002, the Local calls have stood up at the highest point but initially, at the year of 1995 it is at the 70 billion minutes whereas at the peak level it reached to 90 billion minutes.After 1999, Local fixed calls fell to around 75 billion minutes.However, National and international fixed line calls starts at 37 billion minutes and steadily increased to 60 billion minutes.The mobile calls are dramatically increased from 5 to 45 billion minutes respectively as well as it is lowest among all the three categories may be, it can rose and reach local fixed calls.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...siderably over the periods 1995 to 2002.All calls of mobiles steadily increased unt...
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...calls fell to around 75 billion minutes.However, National and international fixed line ...
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...teadily increased to 60 billion minutes.The mobile calls are dramatically increased...
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...is lowest among all the three categories may be, it can rose and reach local fixe...
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...ll the three categories may be, it can rose and reach local fixed calls. ...
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...t can rose and reach local fixed calls.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, then, well, whereas, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11666666667 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89343125794 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 22.4926829268 267% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 155.15225497 43.030603864 361% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 307.0 112.824112599 272% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.0 22.9334400587 262% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.0 5.23603664747 401% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269319930896 0.215688989381 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188835858551 0.103423049105 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613415576372 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188835858551 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613415576372 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.7 13.2329268293 247% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.04 61.2550243902 31% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 10.3012195122 248% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 26.0 10.9970731707 236% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 11.0658536585 235% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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