The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone call in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.h
This chart depicts the year wise telephone calls in calculation of minutes, in billion, since 1995 to 2002.
In 1995, use of mobile phones were just limited to fewer minutes in a range 1 billions in minutes. However it rose to maximum of 40 billions in minutes, which broke all the previous records.
The year 1999 witnessed the use of local fixed line to 90 billions in minutes and over the next 4 years, the rate fell steadily, dropping to the 70 billions in minutes. From the graph, it is evaluated that the use of national and international fixed line was the second most popular among the users in comparison to the use of local fixed line. In regards to the use of local fixed line, minimum use was recorded in year 1995 around 40 billions in minutes whereas over the seven years, the figure was significantly increased to the 70 minutes in billions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
...one calls in calculation of minutes, in billion, since 1995 to 2002. In 1995, use of ...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...nutes in a range 1 billions in minutes. However it rose to maximum of 40 billions in mi...
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Line 5, column 55, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...witnessed the use of local fixed line to 90 billions in minutes and over the next...
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Line 5, column 347, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: Regarding; With regard to
...parison to the use of local fixed line. In regards to the use of local fixed line, minimum us...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 716.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64935064935 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48382352875 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538961038961 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0986572848 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.333333333 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174729586175 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103274178188 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755017354892 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150659658588 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746166107781 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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