The bar chart illustrates the figure for minutes of phone calls by three kinds of media namely: local-fixed line, national and international-fixed line and mobiles in United Kingdom over a period of 7 years starting from 1995. Overall, it is clear that while there were upwnward trends in nation and international-fixed line and mobiles, local-fixed line experienced a stability.
As can be see from the graph, the number of minutes that people called by nation and international-fixed line just under 40 billions, in comparison with only around under 10 billions on mobiles in 1995. Over the next 6 years, there were significant rise in nation and international-fixed line and mobiles, at to exactly 60 billions and to just under 40 billions respectively. between 2001 and 2002, while the figure for minutes that mobiles were used for calls increased significantly by about 10 billions, there was nearly a stability at 60 billions in nation and international-fixed line.
Looking at the other media, local-fixed line was the most popular in 1995 with just over 60 billion of minutes using this. Over the next 3 years, there was an impressive decline of nearly 20 billon of minutes in local-fixed line. From 1998 to 1999, the number of people using local-fixed line to contact remain stable at 90 billion of minutes, which was followed by an dramatical decrease to 70 billion of minutes and was equal by the first time.
- The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 376, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Between
...to just under 40 billions respectively. between 2001 and 2002, while the figure for min...
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Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'billon' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'billons'.
Suggestion: billons
... was an impressive decline of nearly 20 billon of minutes in local-fixed line. From 19...
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Line 3, column 366, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...llion of minutes, which was followed by an dramatical decrease to 70 billion of mi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 236.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02542372881 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24427987547 2.65546596893 122% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495762711864 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 368.1 283.868780488 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.7602326935 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.25 112.824112599 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126875896274 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719848427382 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447655790858 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0958394834548 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203693794319 0.0819641961636 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 61.2550243902 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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