The chart below shows the type of transport young people in four countries prefer to use.
Given is the bar chart delineating the proportion of the young using cars, bicycles and motorcycles as means of transportation in 4 nations, called Great Britain, USA, Germany and, France
It is perceptible that automobiles were voted for by most of the teenagers in these countries, except for Germany where bikes are used more commonly compared to the others.
When it comes to the percentage of youngsters using cars, a remarkable gap, greater than 15%, is registered in France against the country that follows behind. Including that Great Britain and USA both share an identical rate of 60%. Lastly, in Germany young people tend to be less interested in 4-wheel-vehicles than the other countries, henforce leading to the rate of this to 40%.
Not surprisingly, by far the highest rate of the young who possess a bicycle belong to Germany with 45%. Second in terms of transportation interest was Great Britain with somewhere 30%, followed by France with 15%. The USA is the least passionate bike.
Last but not least, the rate of youngsters who love motorbikes in the USA was ranked first, followed by the proportion of those in Great Britain and France both sharing the bottom figure at the rate of 10%. Finally, the second place belongs to Germany in terms of the rate of young people who own a motorbike.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ars, a remarkable gap, greater than 15%, is registered in France against the coun...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, lastly, second, so, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92376681614 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77132221682 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556053811659 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.6042051482 43.030603864 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 122.0 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7777777778 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13298242904 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522658264842 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446043269853 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0788834553275 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452769373725 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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