The chart compares the difference in the payment behaviors of England from 1971 to 2001.

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The chart compares the difference in the payment behaviors of England from 1971 to 2001.

The chart compares the difference in the payment behaviors of England from 1971 to 2001.

Looking at the graph, it is clearly seen that while the spending on petrol, furniture, and restaurants witnessed a downward trend, the reverse was true for computers. In 2011, the spending habit became more diverse in comparison to the year 1971 with the appearance of books, cars, and foods.

Gasoline and automobiles took the biggest portions in 1971 and 2001 respectively. In 1971, 36% of the payment was for petrol and it is followed by a sharp decrease to 8% in 2001. In the same year, furniture consumed 32% of spending, ranked the second among the other objects. Before witnessing a twofold increase, computers were the smallest proportion in 1971 with 7%.

After thirty years, the ratio of furniture was recorded at 8% and was equal to the percentage for petrol. In 2001, among all the subjects, cars outnumbered at 43%. There was also a change in the habits of the UK people in 2001 when books appeared and were demonstrated by the figure of 1%.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, second, so, while, as for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8729281768 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65856675071 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60773480663 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.219851169 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316117806941 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154080595121 0.103423049105 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.287866497684 0.0843802449381 341% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.314624001507 0.15604864568 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.399507288656 0.0819641961636 487% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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