the chart depicts how much international tourism, Dairy products and meat products does Southland export in 2000, 2019 and 2025. It’s easy to find that the amount if meat products export keeps being the lowest.
The amount of international tourism exports maintains growing form 8.1 billion in 2000 to 9.9 billion in 2025. By contrast, the demand for meat products declines steadily, dropping at speed of 0.5 billion per time since 2000.
Unlike the trend of amount changes of exports of international tourism and meat products, the changes of dairy products exports are not monotonous. It first underwent a dramatically increase by 3 billion form 2000(6.9 billion) to 2019(9.9 billion), bur secondly will witness a slight drop by 0.5 billion before 2025.
To sum up, the amount of exports of different products is not closely related.
the chart depicts how much international tourism, Dairy products and meat products does Southland export in 2000, 2019 and 2025. It’s easy to find that the amount if meat products export keeps being the lowest.
The amount of international tourism exports maintains growing from 8.1 billion in 2000 to 9.9 billion in 2025. By contrast, the demand for meat products declines steadily, dropping at speed of 0.5 billion per time since 2000.
Unlike the trend of amount changes of exports of international tourism and meat products, the changes of dairy products exports are not monotonous. It first underwent a dramatically increase by 3 billion form 2000(6.9 billion) to 2019(9.9 billion), bur secondly will witness a slight drop by 0.5 billion before 2025.
To sum up, the amount of exports of different products is not closely related.
- It is argued that we are living in a throw-away society: people throw away what they use in daily life, instead of recycling or reusing them. Why has this happened and how to address this issue 56
- the chart depicts how much international tourism, Dairy products and meat products does Southland export in 2000, 2019 and 2025. It’s easy to find that the amount if meat products export keeps being the lowest.The amount of international tourism exports 56
- the chart depicts how much international tourism, Dairy products and meat products does Southland export in 2000, 2019 and 2025. It’s easy to find that the amount if meat products export keeps being the lowest.The amount of international tourism exports 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
the chart depicts how much international to...
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Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('dramatically') instead an adjective, or a noun ('increase') instead of another adjective.
... are not monotonous. It first underwent a dramatically increase by 3 billion form 20006.9 billion to 20...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 706.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 136.0 196.424390244 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19117647059 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.41495297035 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67287250067 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610294117647 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 186.3 283.868780488 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6876208814 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.857142857 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.640609093334 0.215688989381 297% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.351117914609 0.103423049105 339% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.242746829871 0.0843802449381 288% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.432591133831 0.15604864568 277% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.297694556381 0.0819641961636 363% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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