The chart give information about rates of smoking in men and women from year 1960 to 2000.
The given line graph represents information about rates of smoking in some land by men and women; from 1960 to 2000. The data is calibrated in numbers of individuals. It is clear and coherent representation.
Overall, it can be seen that; rate of smoking for both genders was almost same in year 2000. In 1960 plethora of men were involved in smoking than women.
It is evident that, in year, 2000 both genders had been involved in smoking with almost same proportion which lies in the number of 200 to 240 individuals approximately. In addition to this, there was a slightly difference seen by men and women from year, 1975 to 1995. It ranges from 300 to 210 for females and 500 to 300 for males.
As far as trend was concerned; it had been clearly mentioned in the line graph that, about more than 500 individuals (men) prefer to smoking in 1970, while in the same year female number is far and far less about 200 persons (females) only. Moreover, from year 1960 to 1965 both sexes show great variation in their number. Therefore, for males the number was 600 which had six times more than females.
- Some people think that more and more people are becoming dependent on each other and other think that more and more people are becoming independent. Discuss both view and give opinion. 78
- In some countries people think women should have equality with men, in particular equal rights to work as police officer or serve in the army. Other think women are not suitable for such jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 84
- Some people support development of agriculture like, factory farming and scientific creation of fruits and vegetables. While other oppose. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 56
- The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years 91
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in Europe country between 1979 and 2004. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('slightly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('difference') instead of another adjective.
...imately. In addition to this, there was a slightly difference seen by men and women from year, 1975 t...
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Line 7, column 132, Rule ID: PREFER_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'smoke'?
Suggestion: smoke
...more than 500 individuals men prefer to smoking in 1970, while in the same year female ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58585858586 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4673358402 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535353535354 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.2405707896 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5454545455 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369612137284 0.215688989381 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142547621182 0.103423049105 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143565071724 0.0843802449381 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264511151604 0.15604864568 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0946311887633 0.0819641961636 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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