The bar chart illustrates the split of chores tasks between both se in the United Kingdom.
Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that most the chores was dominated by a woman except for gardening, pet care, and odd jobs. Initially, women play a prominent role in kitchen work, which takes the most essential time of their life comparing with other items ( over 2 hours per day - reaching the peak of time in the whole items) and caring for children. The rate of time, which they spend on these works, doubled compared with the figures of man. It is noticeable that the housework time divergences between both sexes is clearly estimated in cleaning the house and doing laundry. While the former is done by males around 13 minutes, the figures for women is much higher ( around 4 times). In terms of the series of tasks to do laundry, 2 and 25 minutes is the time consuming of man and woman perspectively.
Gardening and pet care were priored by man, who spend at least 49.5 minutes per day to take care; however, 21 minutes for the figure works is the adequate time for lady. That trend continues with the following rate in odd jobs. Women do it as rapidly as they can ( around 9 minutes) while the figure for men is about 16. 5 minutes higher.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...of their life comparing with other items over 2 hours per day - reaching the peak...
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...es, the figures for women is much higher around 4 times. In terms of the series o...
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...jobs. Women do it as rapidly as they can around 9 minutes while the figure for me...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, while, at least, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54625550661 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37769464507 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603524229075 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.650999544 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8181818182 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0313564383639 0.215688989381 15% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0159368441777 0.103423049105 15% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366481162462 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0452813491338 0.15604864568 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537729201666 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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