The chart shows the division of household tasks by gender in Great Britain

The bar chart illustrates the division of household tasks between genders in the United Kingdom.
Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that most of the chores were dominated by a woman except for gardening, pet care, and odd jobs. Initially, women play a prominent role in kitchen work, which takes the most essential time of their life compared with other items ( over 2 hours per day - reaching the peak of time in the whole items) and caring for children. The rate of time, which they spend on these works, doubled compared with the figures of men. It is noticeable that the housework time divergences between both sexes are clearly detailed in cleaning the house and doing laundry. While the former is done by males for around 13 minutes, that works for women are much higher ( around 4 times). In terms of the series of latter tasks, 2 and 25 minutes are the time-consuming of men's and women's perspectives.
Gardening and pet care were prepared by men, who spend at least 49.5 minutes per day taking care; however, 21 minutes is adequate time for ladies. That trend continues with the following rate in odd jobs. Women do it as rapidly as they can ( around 9 minutes) while men use about 16. 5 minutes higher for the same purpose.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... of their life compared with other items over 2 hours per day - reaching the peak...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...es, that works for women are much higher around 4 times. In terms of the series o...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...jobs. Women do it as rapidly as they can around 9 minutes while men use about 16....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, while, at least, except for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68636363636 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44067213893 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 106.607317073 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631818181818 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2361487843 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7272727273 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.060115192078 0.215688989381 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356528341792 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112744161047 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130727058657 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.184875979322 0.0819641961636 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 287, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of their life compared with other items over 2 hours per day - reaching the peak...
^^
Line 2, column 702, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es, that works for women are much higher around 4 times. In terms of the series o...
^^
Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...jobs. Women do it as rapidly as they can around 9 minutes while men use about 16....
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, while, at least, except for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68636363636 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44067213893 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 106.607317073 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631818181818 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2361487843 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7272727273 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.060115192078 0.215688989381 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356528341792 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112744161047 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130727058657 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.184875979322 0.0819641961636 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.