The chart illustrates how often American people ate fast food over a period of 10 years.
Overall, it is clear that most of the people ate fast food once a week and once or twice a month over the period surveyed whereas just a small number of the population had fast food every day.
The percentage of American citizens eating fast food every day was only below 5% in all over a time period. The proportion of those who did not eat fast food was 5% in 2003 and it declined to 4.5% by 2006 and it remains the same in 2013 also. The figure of people just ate fast food a few times in a year at around 13% which slightly increased to 15% in 2006 and 2013. The people who ate fast food several times a week were around 17% in 2003 which reduced to 15.5% in a decade.
Meanwhile, the percentage of people who consumed fast food once in a week and once or twice in a month was approximately the same in 2003. However, after a decade the people who ate once a week was declined by 3% whereas the percentage increased by 3% for the people who consumed fast food once or twice a month.
- The pie chart gives information on UAE government spending in 2000 The total budget was AED 315 billion Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate fast food in restaurants between 2003 and 2013 74
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 136, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...h over the period surveyed whereas just a small number of the population had fast food every day....
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Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...by 2006 and it remains the same in 2013 also. The figure of people just ate fast foo...
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Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...6 and it remains the same in 2013 also. The figure of people just ate fast food a f...
^^^
Line 3, column 369, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...htly increased to 15% in 2006 and 2013. The people who ate fast food several times ...
^^^
Line 4, column 313, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nsumed fast food once or twice a month.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.14285714286 4.92477711251 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22245803737 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.442857142857 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.495191952 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.75 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324544964383 0.215688989381 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180626163772 0.103423049105 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059522719895 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229351561555 0.15604864568 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566089916127 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.03 11.4140731707 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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