The chart shows the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in selected countries.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.
The bar chart reveals the number of mobile phone calls and landlines per 100 people in seven different countries. Overall, it is clear that the number of mobile phone calls in Italy, Sweden, the UK and Germany is higher than the figures for remaining countries.
To begin with, the biggest users of cell phone use are Italians, with 90 calls per 100. This number is two times the number of landlines per 100 people. Germany, Sweden and the UK show a similar pattern, accounting for 88 calls, 84 calls and 70 calls per 100 people respectively. These numbers are much higher over 10 calls of the number of mobile phone calls.
In contrast, the highest number of landlines in Denmark is shown on the chart, with 88 calls per 100 people, slightly higher than the number of mobile phone calls, at just below 85 calls per 100 people. Similarly, just around 65 calls from landlines in the US and Canada. However, these numbers are higher than the lowest number of mobile phone use in Canada, with approximately 36 calls per 100 people and 48 calls by mobile phone in the US.
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- The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 87
- Nowadays more and more young people hold the important positions in the government. Some people think that is a good thing while others argue that it is not suitable. Discuss both views and give your own opinion 68
- Some people think that it is good for a country s culture to import foreign movies and TV programmes Others think that it is better to produce these locally Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- The table below presents the number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981. 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, similarly, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62303664921 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2955592762 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48167539267 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3483090732 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1111111111 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341803064776 0.215688989381 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187511968795 0.103423049105 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929470395722 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291036369769 0.15604864568 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419690565658 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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