the chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010

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the chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010

The bar chart is showing distribution of male and female mentors of six different educational setting in UK in 2010.
Chart is Suggesting that as higher the education goes, men become more dominant. Nevertheless, you can see a significant gap in male and female contribution at both end of the chart.
It is obvious that women can handle children and teenagers whom studying at nursery or preschool, primary school and secondary school better, as female educators hold more than 95 percent share of nursery or preschool and primary school mentors.
Regardless of kids growing older, men participate more in educating children so that there is a slight gap of about 5 percent between male and female teachers in secondary school for as much that colleges benefit from same amount of male and female tutors.
Progression of male contribution continues till we face a 50 percent dominance of male faculties over female faculties in universities.
All in all it can be concluded that with progression of educational grade, male tutors hold greater proportion of total educators.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, second, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18285714286 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93132274941 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594285714286 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7179122289 43.030603864 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.571428571 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349133884245 0.215688989381 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179186840331 0.103423049105 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.186868714175 0.0843802449381 221% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197907865614 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.197671001909 0.0819641961636 241% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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