The bar graph give an information about the popular places of 5000 newly married British couples in 2010.
In general,it can be seen that Asian countries like Thailand and Bali were more attractive than European countries like Spain and Lake District for freshly married couples.
In details,Thailand was the most famous destination,with 1,410 couples choosing this,just ahead of Bali which was chossen by 1335 couples.Bali made almost twice as popular as Costa Rica.Costa Rica was third most popular destination for honeymooners at 750,although this was nowhere near as popular as either Thailand or Bali.The Maldives came next,with 600,while the Greek Islands were slightly less poular,with 432.
Regarding the graph,209 couples chossing Paris that made thirds least popular place.The Spain and The lake District were least popular with 140 and 124 cuples chossing this respectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
regarding, third, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 134.0 196.424390244 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67910447761 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90448106333 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.694029850746 0.547539520022 127% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.367744717 43.030603864 273% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 190.25 112.824112599 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5 22.9334400587 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 5.23603664747 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123294451137 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726624691065 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270273419992 0.0843802449381 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726624691065 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270273419992 0.0819641961636 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.1 13.2329268293 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 61.2550243902 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.3012195122 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.26 11.4140731707 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.06136585366 127% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.