The charts below compare the age structure of the populations of France and India in 1984.

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...pulation in terms of age in two separate countries , france and india in the year...
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...nd 4 percent. Moreover , in france when figures move towards higher age groups,...
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...ards higher age groups, the percentage population started decreasing and male...
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...rcentage population started decreasing and male population bottomed out at 0...
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...population started decreasing and male population bottomed out at 0.5 percent...
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...started decreasing and male population bottomed out at 0.5 percent whereas fe...
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...creasing and male population bottomed out at 0.5 percent whereas female popu...
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...on bottomed out at 0.5 percent whereas female population was at 2 percent. ...
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... 0.5 percent whereas female population was at 2 percent. However , In ind...
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... female population was at 2 percent. However , In india population of chil...
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...pulation was at 2 percent. However , In india population of children pea...
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...ulation was at 2 percent. However , In india population of children peak...
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...s at 2 percent. However , In india population of children peaked at 7 per...
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...ver , In india population of children peaked at 7 percent but as the graph mov...
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...n france , whereas in india it decreased with increase in age group.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, moreover, then, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93125 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79853480732 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5125 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 22.4926829268 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.9753249417 43.030603864 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 197.25 112.824112599 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.0 22.9334400587 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 5.23603664747 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 45.0 1.69756097561 2651% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280560478242 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.205471657744 0.103423049105 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514739878919 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205216361999 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371268991876 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 13.2329268293 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.34 61.2550243902 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 10.3012195122 172% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.9970731707 164% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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