Advertising encourages consumers to buy in quantity rather than promoting quality. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Whether iron TV or internet , we daily come acr...
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Whether iron TV or internet , we daily come across various commercia...
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Whether iron TV or internet , we daily come across various commercial...
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...we daily come across various commercials . I agree with the statement that adverts...
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...statement that adverts attract customers to purchase the product in quantity . Ho...
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...ers to purchase the product in quantity . However , I disagree that adults donot...
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...rchase the product in quantity . However , I disagree that adults donot promote q...
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...oduct in quantity . However , I disagree that adults donot promote quality . A nu...
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...agree that adults donot promote quality . A number of arguments surround my o...
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... adults donot promote quality . A number of arguments surround my opinion. ...
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...lts donot promote quality . A number of arguments surround my opinion. Undo...
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...romote quality . A number of arguments surround my opinion. Undoubtedly , ...
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...lity . A number of arguments surround my opinion. Undoubtedly , people ar...
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...r of arguments surround my opinion. Undoubtedly , people are lured by th...
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...ts surround my opinion. Undoubtedly , people are lured by the adverts whi...
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...s surround my opinion. Undoubtedly , people are lured by the adverts whic...
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...nd my opinion. Undoubtedly , people are lured by the adverts which propel ...
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...y opinion. Undoubtedly , people are lured by the adverts which propel them ...
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...on. Undoubtedly , people are lured by the adverts which propel them to purc...
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...ich propel them to purchase the products . Firstly , they provide many offers to a...
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... them to purchase the products . Firstly , they provide many offers to attract peo...
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...ey provide many offers to attract people like discount , buy one get one free an...
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... offers to attract people like discount , buy one get one free and many more . ...
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...offers to attract people like discount , buy one get one free and many more . S...
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...nt , buy one get one free and many more . Secondly , we cannot overlook the pri...
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...t , buy one get one free and many more . Secondly , we cannot overlook the pric...
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...e get one free and many more . Secondly , we cannot overlook the price inflation...
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... get one free and many more . Secondly , we cannot overlook the price inflation ...
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...ecause of that everyone want to purchase more things by spending less amount of ...
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...ant to purchase more things by spending less amount of money . On the other h...
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...things by spending less amount of money . On the other hand , commercials are...
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...ngs by spending less amount of money . On the other hand , commercials are ver...
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...s amount of money . On the other hand , commercials are very crucial as throug...
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...ney . On the other hand , commercials are very crucial as through these we com...
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...hrough these we come across new products with new advancements. It is not so tha...
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... is not so that they donot offer quality . For instance , my brother recently pu...
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... they donot offer quality . For instance , my brother recently purchased three ...
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...they donot offer quality . For instance , my brother recently purchased three s...
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...ty . For instance , my brother recently purchased three shirts in just one tho...
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...stance , my brother recently purchased three shirts in just one thousand rupe...
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...rother recently purchased three shirts in just one thousand rupees . The mate...
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...ased three shirts in just one thousand rupees . The material of these shirts i...
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...ree shirts in just one thousand rupees . The material of these shirts is very h...
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...irts in just one thousand rupees . The material of these shirts is very high qu...
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...quality and pattern is also of new trend . In a nutshell , adverts not only off...
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...lity and pattern is also of new trend . In a nutshell , adverts not only offer q...
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... is also of new trend . In a nutshell , adverts not only offer quantity but als...
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...y but also provide good quality products . but people should make right choice be...
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...t also provide good quality products . but people should make right choice before ...
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...ould make right choice before purchasing products and donot get lured by just lo...
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...right choice before purchasing products and donot get lured by just looking at q...
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...ot get lured by just looking at quantity of the product .
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...et lured by just looking at quantity of the product .
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...ust looking at quantity of the product .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, look, second, secondly, so, for instance, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 192.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56084727546 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630208333333 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2184074481 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6923076923 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7692307692 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 54.0 5.01903807615 1076% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0597629416899 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0247182654443 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038785660484 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0427418069652 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401774408182 0.056905535591 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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