The bar chart illustrates how many tickets have bees sold to vary events in 2009, while the table provides information about event prices in the same year.
To begin, the most popular place to go was cinema, whilst sports events were the least visited at the time. The prise for one cinema ticket cost less than a fifth dollars and to attend a footbal game would cost four-fifths dollars for one person.
Looking at details, more than 1050000 tickets has been sold to people who went to see movies, almost 350000 tickest have been bought at theme parks, and just over 150000 at sports mathes.
However, there was a slight difference in prices for football games. Those accounted at $71,$73 and $75 for NRU, NRL, AFL games respectively. Other sports events were more affordable. One person ticket for a bassketball game cost $34, while a ticket for a cricket game cost $24.
Overall, the most popular and the cheapest entertainment event was cinema, the low-priced, but the least visited sport event was a cricket game, while a football match considere as the most expensive, yet the least popular entertainment venue.
- The charts below give information about attendance at entertainment venues and admission prices to those venues in 2009.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- The graph below shows relative price changes for fresh fruits and vegestables, sugars and sweets and carbonated drinks between 1979 and 2009.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features amd make comparisons where relevant 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...nts were the least visited at the time. The prise for one cinema ticket cost less than a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89473684211 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45504737586 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589473684211 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5286744354 43.030603864 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.333333333 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0915320036551 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406249315369 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398786361119 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0572785045324 0.15604864568 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040454582561 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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