The charts below give information about the number of marriages and divorces between 1970 and 2000, and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graphs illustrate how the number of marriages and divorces changed over the period from 1970 to 2000 and give information concerning the marital status of American adults at the beginning and the end of the research period.
According to the first graph, the number of marriages was more than twice the numbwr of divorces. In 1980, the number of marriages was equal to the previous year while that of divorces slightly rose to approximate 1.3 million. After 1980, the number of both marriages and divorces showed a downward trend. At the end of the period, the number of marriages were exactly twice as that of divorces, reaching 2 million and one million respectively.
In the case of the second graph, the most striking feature is that the percentage of divorced couples almost doubled from around 4 percent to almost 10 percent. The percentage of people who never married also rose slightly. The ratio of married people and widowed people decreased respectively from about 70 percent to 60 percent and approximately 10 percent to 6 percent.
Overall, adult Americans were more likely to live alone in 2000 than in 1970
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: According to the first graph, the number of marriages was more than twice the numbwr of divorces.
Error: numbwr Suggestion: number
flaws:
The order of the graphs is wrong
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 191 200
No. of Characters: 921 1000
No. of Different Words: 98 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.718 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.822 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.562 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 72 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 51 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 32 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 18 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.222 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.443 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.444 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.445 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.745 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.172 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96335078534 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62998213085 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539267015707 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0283870035 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210220792534 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864794407388 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083828588887 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142082255215 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0968846493125 0.0819641961636 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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