The given line chart demonstrates how many people who are from UK visited to abroad and how many tourist came to UK who are from overseas within the given period of time starting from 1979 to 1999 incluading. Furthermore, the bar chart represents to give information about where is the best destinations which are Turkey, Greece, Usa, Spain and France by UK residents in 1999.
According to line chart, beginning of the perid 10 millions overseans residents visited to UK at the same time about 12 millions British people visited to abroad. Then both values went up slighly over the next 8 years. This was followed by another upward trend, value of British Tourist steeper than other, British touist reached about 53 million otherwise among of the visit to UK reached just over 25 million end of the given period.
The bar chart shows, France was choosen over 10 million British person. While usa and spain attracted the largest numbers of British touris with about 4 million and 9 million respectively, Turkey was the least popular country among the just 2 million. Greece was just 1 million higher than Turkey’s value.
Overall, tourism was rising by day by in UK. In 1979 the value was just 22 millions (including incoming and outcoming) tourist after just 20 years later this value rose and reached approximatly 78 million. Morever about 29 millions UK tourist choose to visit 5 favorite destinations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... who are from overseas within the given period of time starting from 1979 to 1999 incluading. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96638655462 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55030595178 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8429762935 43.030603864 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.454545455 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270712291495 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11334081816 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0951120087794 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174407823879 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883079233917 0.0819641961636 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.