The charts below give Information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy In 2000 and projections for 2050

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The charts below give Information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy In 2000 and projections for 2050.

The pie charts provide information regarding the percentage of populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and give a prediction for 2050.

From the chart which indicates the number of populations of Yemen, in 2000, the 0-14 years people accounted for the largest sector with about half of total populations. However, it is expected that the number decline to 37% in 2050. The second popular age group 15-59 years population with 46,3% in 2000. This figure will be 57,3% after 5 decades. The smallest group is oldest population. There is a marginal increase in the percentage of this group from 3,5% to 5,7% within the years.

Moving to the data on Italy, adults represented overwhelming greater number than others with 61,6% in 2000. While the number for children and old was 24,1% and 14,3% respectively. However, it is forecasted that, there will be decrease to 46,2% in the number of adults while the percentage of old will rise to 42,3%. The trend for children also will fall to 11,5% in 2050.

Overall, the number of adults represents the highest number in both countries and the number for children and old register as a second sector respectively.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: is the oldest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, regarding, second, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90306122449 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62445329584 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540816326531 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.550623445 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0833333333 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265687500899 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099011947006 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14548229252 0.0843802449381 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208312237155 0.15604864568 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.197454124423 0.0819641961636 241% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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