The given charts give data about the expenditure of four UK countries on buying books via the internet.
Overall, there was an upward trend in the UK spending habits for books bought online between 1997 and 2002. Furthermore, England was responsible for the largest proportion of books purchased on the internet.
According to the line graph, it is obvious that UK citizens had a tendency to invest more money in buying books online. To be specific, in 1997, the UK's expenditure on online books was only around 10 million. The figure gradually increased over the examined period, reaching a peak at 24 million after 5 years. Meanwhile, in the period from 1997 to 1998, the graph also witnessed a dramatic growth in the amount of money allocated to books via the internet, rising by 5 million from 11 million to 16 million
In addition, there was a significant difference in the budget for online books among 4 UK countries, including Northern Ireland, England, Wales and Scotland. While the budget's England people for books purchased on the Internet accounted for four-fifth of the total expenditure by UK country, the pattern was reversed for Northern Ireland, where the figure was only 1%. The 2 other countries, Wales and Scotland, were relatively low in buying online books, with 10% and 8% respectively.
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- The number of people being sent to prison is increasing year on year While some people believe prisons are the best way to tackle crime others suggest that community service is successful Discuss both views and give your own opinion 89
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 184, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (England) must be used with a third-person verb: 'peoples'.
Suggestion: peoples
...and Scotland. While the budgets England people for books purchased on the Internet acc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1105.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02272727273 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79528454768 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577272727273 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.0213359119 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.125 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207054310181 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979718578232 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757329105539 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153434951572 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526274425398 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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