The charts below give information about the ratio of sodium, saturated fat and added sugar which easy to affect to health of person if eaten too much in four daily meals which consume by the Americans.
Overall, it is clear that the percentage of sodium and saturated fat which primarily consumes in dinner and lunch, while USA resident would like to spend the large proportion of added sugar in snacks.
Looking at the pie charts more closely, one can see that in dinner, the percentage of sodium which mostly consumes by the Americans, is 43 percent, saturated fat is followed at 37 percent and the added sugar is just 23 percent. Moreover, lunch that the percentage of sodium is nearly equal to the proportion of saturated fat in the USA, which is 26 and 29 percent. In addition, The dominantly percentage of added sugar which dominantly consumes for snack at 42 percent, it more than the proportion of added sugar of breakfast and dinner combined. Besides that, The USA citizens tend to eat breakfast which ratio of sodium, saturated fat and added sugar is quite similar.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: yahya976
Essay Categories
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, moreover, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8064516129 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52356222137 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494623655914 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.9954952213 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.0 112.824112599 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 22.9334400587 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.23603664747 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1329295473 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815414056151 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657190203787 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118904781652 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076398744154 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.2329268293 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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