The three pie charts depicts the information about the average proportion in typical food of twice type of nutrients like sodium, saturated fat, added sugar, all of which may be unhealthy if takes too much.
After analyzing, it can be seen clearly that in first pie chart sodium include in the snacks only 14 percent and saturated fat include 21 proportion and sugar double involve in the snacks from previous chart.In contrast, in the breakfast sodium contain 14 percentile in first chart then in second and last chart saturated fat and sugar 2 proportion more include than previous one.
The pie further collates that in first, sodium enter the around above two-fifth in dinner, saturated fat under the two-fifth and sugar almost just under a quarter in the dinner. however, lunch is more consumed by the U.S.A individuals. In the lunch sodium include nearly one-third in first, next saturated fat add roughly one quarter and sugar include almost one fifth in third chart.
Overall, sodium and saturated fat is more add in dinner and sugar in more include in the snacks and these are meals consumed by U.S.A people which is unhealthy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: percentiles
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, so, then, third, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96875 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39390774067 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536458333333 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.3430360461 43.030603864 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 159.0 112.824112599 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 22.9334400587 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 5.23603664747 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162962225064 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960229351176 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150072798018 0.0843802449381 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141829008198 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.165592078894 0.0819641961636 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.2329268293 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.4329268293 249% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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