It is often argued that numerous individuals ponder that it is better to accept a worst part such as an unsatisfied duty or shortage of fund. However, others humans think that it is good to try and improve such situations. This essay will intend to analyze the both the views along with my perspective.
On the one hand, when they accept the bad situations then they can face the any difficulties of their life. To explain it, they never loose the hope in their life and also, they handle in the personal life issues. In addition, they become more the hard heart and they teach the others masses to how face the bad situations in their life. To epitome, Canadian school students failed in their final exam but they faced the bad terms then in next year they were topped in their class. Therefore, these situations make the person perfect in their life.
On the other hand, trying is the best way to reach on the peak level. To elaborate it, when people try to things then they find their mistakes and then they improve their mistakes in any field and they improve better from previous work and give the 100 percent in any field of work. Also, they touch the peak level and reach on their goals. For example, a headline was published in "THE MOSCOW TIMES" newspaper revealed that Japan company workers could not completed their presentation because some slides were not include in the presentation, when they again tried to find the mistakes then they were find and prepare their work and delivered to their company. As a result, they promoted to the level of manager.
Overall, although with the accept of the bad situations they make more hard-work and strong yet I believe that trying is the best path to catch their goals and complete their works.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...uals ponder that it is better to accept a worst part such as an unsatisfied duty ...
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Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
... others humans think that it is good to try and improve such situations. This essay wil...
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Line 5, column 468, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'complete'
Suggestion: complete
...ed that Japan company workers could not completed their presentation because some slides ...
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Line 5, column 526, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'included'.
Suggestion: included
...esentation because some slides were not include in the presentation, when they again tr...
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Line 5, column 613, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'found'.
Suggestion: found
...ied to find the mistakes then they were find and prepare their work and delivered to...
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Line 7, column 24, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...l of manager. Overall, although with the accept of the bad situations they make more ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69131832797 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28126380671 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520900321543 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.1404854526 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.214285714 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181054540669 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777523933264 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618327370428 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139969113607 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070539855174 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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