The statistics of the pie charts mention the avareage poportion of sodium, saturated fats and added sugars in the American's ordinary meals. If the consumers abuse any type , it could be harmful for your health.
The dominated percentages in the sodium pie is 43% while the ratio of sodium used in snack people eat is 14%. The numbers show the alarming reality in the way people using sodium in their typical meals. Over using sodium could cause high blood pressure,heart disease, stroke even calcium losses. Besides, sodium added in dishes at lunch makes up 29% which also a noticeable number customers should think throughoutly even home-cooked or not.
Turning to the saturated fat problem, the given cart illustrates approximated similar numbers in each element. While dinner still the period of meal people uses the type of nuitrient the most with 37%, breakfast and luch including satured fats have the percentages are 16% and 21% respectively. Compared with sodium, the satured fats in junk food, specifically snacks is higher.
Moving on to the last element- added sugar, people could found that the ratio of added sugar in the USA lunch dishes is lower than satured fats 7% and sodium 10% whereas snack has the highest percentages of add sugar used on it which accountes for 42%. In addition, sugar is the ingredient consumers just need small amount to have a balanced diet.
As a conclusion,each resident in the USA should found out their own amount of sodium, saturated fats and added sugar on their diet which is fit for their health. According to the nuitrition experts, the sufficient amount of the mentioned elements could boost the quality of health while absuing it could led people to have cardiovascular diseases.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so, still, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 965.302439024 150% => OK
No of words: 288.0 196.424390244 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02430555556 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6437073113 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 106.607317073 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 283.868780488 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.219518118 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.307692308 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0755092627819 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0304717369456 0.103423049105 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308382239503 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0463710661262 0.15604864568 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208246433301 0.0819641961636 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 40.7170731707 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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