Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dium, saturated fats and added sugars in the Americans ordinary meals. If the con...
^^
Line 1, column 173, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y meals. If the consumers abuse any type , it could be harmful for your health. ...
^^
Line 2, column 253, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , heart
...g sodium could cause high blood pressure,heart disease, stroke even calcium losses. Be...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , each
...o have a balanced diet. As a conclusion,each resident in the USA should found out th...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 304, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...uality of health while absuing it could led people to have cardiovascular diseases....
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so, still, whereas, while, in addition
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 965.302439024 150% => OK
No of words: 288.0 196.424390244 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02430555556 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6437073113 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 106.607317073 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 283.868780488 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.219518118 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.307692308 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0755092627819 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0304717369456 0.103423049105 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308382239503 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0463710661262 0.15604864568 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208246433301 0.0819641961636 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 40.7170731707 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100 Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
--------------------- Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dium, saturated fats and added sugars in the Americans ordinary meals. If the con...
^^
Line 1, column 173, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y meals. If the consumers abuse any type , it could be harmful for your health. ...
^^
Line 2, column 253, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , heart
...g sodium could cause high blood pressure,heart disease, stroke even calcium losses. Be...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , each
...o have a balanced diet. As a conclusion,each resident in the USA should found out th...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 304, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...uality of health while absuing it could led people to have cardiovascular diseases....
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so, still, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 965.302439024 150% => OK
No of words: 288.0 196.424390244 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02430555556 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6437073113 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 106.607317073 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 283.868780488 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.219518118 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.307692308 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0755092627819 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0304717369456 0.103423049105 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308382239503 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0463710661262 0.15604864568 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208246433301 0.0819641961636 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 40.7170731707 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.