The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart describe the percentages of sodium, saturated fat and added sugar in typical meals consumed in the USA, with the major consumed at the night are sodium and saturated fat, while at the lunch snacks is highly consumed by people in the USA.

It shows that sodium is highly consumed by people in the USA in the dinner time, the proportion is almost fifty percent, while added sugar is less consumed in the dinner time, it is only around quarter percents.

On the other hand people in the USA consumed added sugar a lot on their smack rather than the saturated fat and sodium. It is consumed nearest half percent, which is forty two percent.

In conclusion, added sugar is highly consumed by USA citizen on their snack, while sodium is highly consumed at the dinner time.

Votes
Average: 1.1 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: forty-two
...consumed nearest half percent, which is forty two percent. In conclusion, added sugar ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, in conclusion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 651.0 965.302439024 67% => OK
No of words: 139.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68345323741 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2464021577 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 67.0 106.607317073 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482014388489 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 204.3 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.315971359 43.030603864 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.2 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 5.23603664747 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0357677364799 0.215688989381 17% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0219802108581 0.103423049105 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0225982734271 0.0843802449381 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0243357082512 0.15604864568 16% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222010299768 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 40.7170731707 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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