The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The rendered line charts depict the information about the difference of sale of electrical three gadgets and how much time was consumed by housework in a nation in the given time frame.
By analysing, it can be seen clearly that there was 0% of ownership of refrigerators in the first year but it increase dramatically in the next 40 years to reach at its peak about 100% and then it was remained constant in the next years. Meanwhile, the sale of vacuum cleaner was raised upto 100% in 2019 from 30% as compared to washing machine which was around 40% in 1920 and then rose by 31 with some fluctuations in 2019.
Strolling further, the consumption of time by housework, initially was utilising 50 hours per week but with the help of appliances it was decreased constantly around one fifth hours in the year of 1960. In contrast, after the 1960s the numbers of hours spent on housework remained in between the range of 20 to 10 hours per week in the next 59 years.
Overall, the ownership of refrigerators and vacuum was maximum and with introduction of these appliances in homes the time consumption by home works was decreased.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
... refrigerators in the first year but it increase dramatically in the next 40 years to re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.695 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73345477373 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 28.5914711448 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.5 112.824112599 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.3333333333 22.9334400587 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.23603664747 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16580164341 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841663552145 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361818361236 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10149214818 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326763688468 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.