Some people believe that climate change has the greatest effect on people's way of life. Other believe that economy of the region has the greatest effect. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is always debateable that which one has the greatest effect on individuals way of life climate change or economy of the nation. This essay will highlight the reasons that why folks has different views about this trend and I will give my opinion after the discussion.
To begin with the formerly view, even though there are myriad of reasons behind this orthodox thinking but the most prime is global warming. To elucidate it, in the recent times when the maximum was temperature around 38 degree celcius and human could easily go anywhere on their bike, public transport, cycle as well but due to increase in temperature in the summer people prefer to commute on cars equipped with air conditioner without expose in sun heat. Moreover, plethora of amenities likes cooling system, refrigerators swimming pools are available in the most of houses. For instance, according to the article of Hindustan Times, the number of cars are increased dramatically as compare with recent decades because of global warming. Therefore, climate change also put affect on the way of living.
On the flip side, economy of any area also change the way of living of that dwellers and it is totally directly interlinked with each other. To explicate it, if the economy of any part kf the world will go down then the people will also suffer and stay accordingly what they are receiving from the authorities. On the other hand, when this trend will opposite then folks also enjoy the luxurious life and each and everything will available in their nation. Apart from it, people will not only enjoy their life but also a lots of job opportunities will be opened for them so that they will grow with the growth of their living place. Thus, people are believed that economy of region effect the way of living.
To conclude, although individuals have different perspectives about the change in lifestyle,yet in my opinion both are playing an equal role in making the life different from past time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 563, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the houses') or simply say ''most houses''.
Suggestion: most of the houses; most houses
...ors swimming pools are available in the most of houses. For instance, according to the article...
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Line 3, column 777, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ing. Therefore, climate change also put affect on the way of living. On the flip side,...
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Line 5, column 520, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...will not only enjoy their life but also a lots of job opportunities will be opened for...
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Line 8, column 92, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , yet
...rspectives about the change in lifestyle,yet in my opinion both are playing an equal...
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Line 8, column 176, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
... role in making the life different from past time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, apart from, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90178571429 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52276869542 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553571428571 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.8238771309 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.692307692 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8461538462 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0769230769 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240378489455 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974943838161 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117864630787 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134360639611 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707722150366 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.