The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The information in regard to the alteration of possession of electronic things and time used in doing domestic works in one nation in given specific time,is illustrated by line graphs.The data is celibrated in thousands and hours per week
Now.Looking at the details,the ownership of refrigerator was zero in 1920 which rose up in next twenty years with fifty five thousands .Meanwhile,the possession of this appliance surged up with hundred thousands ownership in upcoming forty years and remained at peak in year 2019.Whereas,ownership of vacuum cleaner and washing machine was thirty and forty thousands in 1920 respectively.In regard to this,the possession of vacuum cleaner Was inclined with seventy thousands in next forty years till 1960.Noticeably,this ownership showed little increase upto 2000 with hundred thousands and stood at top level in last year.Contrastly,washing machines possession showed fluctuations in entire time period and was had seventy two thousand possession on year 2019.
Probing ahead ,with remaining information,the number of the hours spent for domestic work was fifty hours per week in 1920whilst this value culminate in next twenty years with twenty hours per week in 1960.Additionally,the data remained allmost same till 2000 which was accounted fifteen hours oer week . lastly,the number of hours was ten in 2019.
Overall,possession of the electronic appliances were different from time to time however number of hours spent in domestic work showed downfall trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, lastly, look, whereas, while, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 965.302439024 133% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65198237885 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.610059451 2.65546596893 136% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52422907489 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 22.4926829268 249% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 376.774800113 43.030603864 876% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 320.75 112.824112599 284% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.75 22.9334400587 247% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.75 5.23603664747 263% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 1.69756097561 1826% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130866591818 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858290569216 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572837929527 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953550832509 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465488382866 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.6 13.2329268293 254% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.64 61.2550243902 24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 10.3012195122 244% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.38 11.4140731707 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 11.4329268293 516% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.9970731707 222% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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