The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons

the given charts give information about how the rate of households with electrical appliances and the number of hours of housework changed in one country over a period of 100-year starting from 1920.
overall, the percentage of households with washing machine, refrigerator and vaccuum cleaner increased sharply while the amount of time spent doing housework saw a downward trend from 1920 to 2019.
As of 1920,the percentage of household refrigerator stood at 0 before going up sharply and reached the highest point in 1980 ( about 100 percent). Then, it continued to remain unchanged. there was a noticeable growth in vacuum cleaner. beginning with 30%, it climbed considerably by 70% and reached a peak of 100% before remaining unchanged from 200 to 2019 as well.
At the beginning, the percentage of washing machine was 40%. from 1920 to 1980, this proportion fluctuated . after that, it increased rapidly and in 2019, it was approximately just over 70%. by contrast, the figure for amount of time spent doing housework saw a downward trend between 1920-2019. over a period of 60-year, the number of hours of housework per week ,per household started at 50% and declined approximately by 35% in 1980. 20 years after, it remained at the same level (15%) and continued decreasing to 10% in the end of the period.

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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ly and reached the highest point in 1980 about 100 percent. Then, it continued to...
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... percentage of washing machine was 40%. from 1920 to 1980, this proportion fluctuate...
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...0 to 1980, this proportion fluctuated . after that, it increased rapidly and in 2019,...
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...19, it was approximately just over 70%. by contrast, the figure for amount of time...
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Suggestion: ,
...he number of hours of housework per week ,per household started at 50% and decline...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, well, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01834862385 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83227989203 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582568807339 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.3369790421 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1666666667 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.41666666667 5.23603664747 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230545987707 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765424805848 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977603511821 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158507293843 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773524928603 0.0819641961636 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
the given charts give information about how...
^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overall
...period of 100-year starting from 1920. overall, the percentage of households with wash...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly and reached the highest point in 1980 about 100 percent. Then, it continued to...
^^
Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: CONTINUE_TO_REMAIN[1]
Message: Use simply 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
...nt in 1980 about 100 percent. Then, it continued to remain unchanged. there was a noticeable growt...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...Then, it continued to remain unchanged. there was a noticeable growth in vacuum clean...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Beginning
... a noticeable growth in vacuum cleaner. beginning with 30%, it climbed considerably by 70...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 61, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: From
... percentage of washing machine was 40%. from 1920 to 1980, this proportion fluctuate...
^^^^
Line 4, column 106, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...1920 to 1980, this proportion fluctuated . after that, it increased rapidly and in...
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Line 4, column 109, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...0 to 1980, this proportion fluctuated . after that, it increased rapidly and in 2019,...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 191, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: By
...19, it was approximately just over 70%. by contrast, the figure for amount of time...
^^
Line 4, column 296, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Over
...saw a downward trend between 1920-2019. over a period of 60-year, the number of hour...
^^^^
Line 4, column 363, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...he number of hours of housework per week ,per household started at 50% and decline...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, well, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01834862385 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83227989203 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582568807339 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.3369790421 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1666666667 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.41666666667 5.23603664747 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230545987707 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765424805848 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977603511821 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158507293843 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773524928603 0.0819641961636 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.